Here's What I see:
The technique is very good, as usual, A little lack of texture in the blue marks on the face. and 2 other identical frames showing the same picture in different sizes. This make me think it's like an abstract art picture.
What it really hurts this piece is the lack of background focus, it leaves a hollow space of incompletion, It needs more concept depht, I'd say thie score would rise to very good levels with a more adequate background and frame.
I must ignore the watermark, but it surely gives a hint: A little more luminousity.
The piece is very good as it is, and a little edition would do so much to raise the score to a near perfect.
thanks for the critique! i just wanted to say that the reason for the lack of background is because it's just a simple icon commission so it can't have too much in it ^_^ the little duplicate frames in the corner there are the different sizes of icons